"The day he first told me he
was starting to disappear I
didn't believe him & so he stopped
& held his hand up to the sun & it
was like thin paper in the light &
finally I said, you seem very calm
for a man who is disappearing &
he said it was a relief after all
those years of trying to keep the
pieces of his life in one place.
Later on, I went to see him
again & as I was leaving, he
put a package in my hand.
This is the last piece of my
life, he said. take good care
of it & then he smiled & was
gone & the room filled with the
sound of the wind & when I
opened the package there was
nothing there & I thought
there must be some mistake
or maybe I dropped it & I
got down on my hands &
knees & looked until the light
began to fade & then slowly
I felt pieces of my life
fall away & suddenly I
understood what he meant
& I lay there for a long
time crying & laughing at
the same time. "
Brian Andreas
Story People
11.01.2011
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Wow...this is lovely.
Amazing. i needed this today.
:)
so great.
i enjoy story of the day too:
http://www.storypeople.com/storypeople/SignupStoryOfDay.do
story people is on my list of books to buy. i've been contemplating it for a while, but this post just confirmed it--andreas writes in such a beautiful, straightforward way. your posts are like that too, my dear:)
so lovely.
i feel stupid for asking, but i really want to know, what does this story mean?
I don't understand either...but I'd like to. Can someone explain it?
This is writing at its finest.
holy cow.
dear lizzy and anonymous:
i don't get it either! but i feel like it's on the tip of my tongue...as though i'm just about to figure it out--in my life--life is just about to reveal it.
but then again, some of the very best things--well, they're not meant to be understood.
That hurt my heart.
wow. that made me stop and think.
and meg, you described it perfectly to lizzy and anonymous :) that's exactly why any words like this are beautiful. because it's all right there on the tip of my tongue and the words can figure out how to say it just right.
tearing up right now, this is so hauntingly gorgeous i can't even wrap my mind around it.
mmmm. that is so good.
another description for that familiar feeling.
thanks for posting that,
Beck
http://beckcourtpress.blogspot.com/
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