tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post2520308090699579482..comments2023-09-09T06:12:36.477-04:00Comments on the wild and wily ways of a brunette bombshell: words and time.meg feehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16588092985523441189noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-14301325416007594582011-12-15T19:53:48.212-05:002011-12-15T19:53:48.212-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Dee Paulinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16395771931723705072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-45146871051016199562011-12-14T18:30:48.355-05:002011-12-14T18:30:48.355-05:00can't get over this: "and he was there be...can't get over this: "and he was there before. but not during. not really. and so much has changed and passed and morphed. and for each of the worlds i've traveled through, he's traversed his own." yes, yes and yes.katildahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17794183122186770465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-30157197103323264902011-12-13T21:06:26.483-05:002011-12-13T21:06:26.483-05:00i don't know who monx is, but impressive writi...i don't know who monx is, but impressive writing all around, from meg to monx's response.katnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-61960214549354541212011-12-13T03:32:43.464-05:002011-12-13T03:32:43.464-05:00Absolute truth, my friend.
It's shocking how...Absolute truth, my friend. <br /><br />It's shocking how terrifying it is to know someone for so long, and let them know you in and out. You're throwing yourself at them with everything you've got, just hoping for acceptance. <br /><br />Love your writing. Excited to hear more!<br /><br />http://frolicsandschmoozings.blogspot.com/rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09067889298018718417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-45606247674812286032011-12-13T02:03:19.969-05:002011-12-13T02:03:19.969-05:00parlons peu mais parlons bien;
should have been a ...parlons peu mais parlons bien;<br />should have been a choice, but it was a timid soul<br /><br />my fingers pulled my hand to a spot on her thigh, had to really, and wanted to stay<br />something about the curve from knee to hem, wrapped in wool-- black i think.<br /><br />i mumble something, trying to sound--<br /><br />well you know. Silence. Heavy, dripping seconds.<br />she half chokes on her saliva<br /><br />she sure has changed from the little beach ball she once was-- time's been kind<br />Where once were hidden lines of her body are stark asymptotes 'tween the heat and the cold<br /><br />seven years?<br /><br />eight.<br />four.<br />six?<br />An even number of years-- sounds better that way.<br />yesterday.<br /><br />she still hasn't said anything. should I move my hand?<br /><br />When it started, i have vague memories of that. then I left. sort of. what did we look like? How now? she's called me, scar for scar and wrinkle for wrinkle.<br /><br />one more second and I move my hand.<br />or maybe I won't. is it sweating?<br /><br />hope not. Say something. anything. quick. nothing. i got nothing. soul's drowning in her iris.<br /><br />where has she been all this time? it's been too long. or just enough<br /><br />take me, i'm home. damp silence or not. odd years or even. she's walking down my marrow, leading me home.<br /><br />i can't take it. I'm clearing my throat.Monxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-47567894845451990502011-12-13T00:47:44.755-05:002011-12-13T00:47:44.755-05:00Even though I'm copying what everyone else wro...Even though I'm copying what everyone else wrote, but... LOVE your writing! :)Ariel Tyler Henleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12054344857704361835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-7924091229863186622011-12-13T00:32:10.944-05:002011-12-13T00:32:10.944-05:00I have no words for your words.
Truly beautiful ...I have no words for your words. <br />Truly beautiful writing!<br />I'm left wondering if these words are based in truth, and if so I hope it all goes beautifully for you.<br />xoxJohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16277973787647515497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-43798261608765013662011-12-12T22:03:35.015-05:002011-12-12T22:03:35.015-05:00I'm obsessed with this. You are such a wonderf...I'm obsessed with this. You are such a wonderful writer.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02463209158600746767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-4718044326307032462011-12-12T19:37:43.829-05:002011-12-12T19:37:43.829-05:00I know everyone has said it....but it really is be...I know everyone has said it....but it really is beautiful. Gah! How I wish I could express my self so eloquently. I've come to the point where I crave your posts, more than just once daily. Hehe, it's getting bad. :o)Sonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12459460252068395786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-37073005187053073492011-12-12T18:00:30.424-05:002011-12-12T18:00:30.424-05:00so beautiful. and so happy for you if this is true...so beautiful. and so happy for you if this is true.jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14836532940578968626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-7994571121388641932011-12-12T12:33:48.560-05:002011-12-12T12:33:48.560-05:00holy...
this is beautiful.holy...<br />this is beautiful.Brissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16887834932421567389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-87951448172371942252011-12-12T11:48:24.292-05:002011-12-12T11:48:24.292-05:00These words drew me right in. The scene is bare bu...These words drew me right in. The scene is bare but somehow so vivid in my mind.Tiffany Kadanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08887874943048853535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-64772751987493743642011-12-12T11:03:02.723-05:002011-12-12T11:03:02.723-05:00I don't know what this means, but it sure is c...I don't know what this means, but it sure is cool!Spratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01016273510706173101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-56270952519838423182011-12-12T10:27:38.642-05:002011-12-12T10:27:38.642-05:00you need to write a novel or something. You use yo...you need to write a novel or something. You use your words so beautifully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-6435682306166936682011-12-12T09:55:40.861-05:002011-12-12T09:55:40.861-05:00absolutely beautiful.absolutely beautiful.Rosehttp://bindandcreate.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-80791352456641571562011-12-12T09:55:39.756-05:002011-12-12T09:55:39.756-05:00You are SO talented. I always check your blog the ...You are SO talented. I always check your blog the moment it pops up in my google reader because I can't wait to hear what you say.hrck the heraldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08591344607834308735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-19115536320617236912011-12-12T09:52:04.525-05:002011-12-12T09:52:04.525-05:00Stunningly written. You are such an inspiration.Stunningly written. You are such an inspiration.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08167759125277011929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6155538679069971441.post-68704612742366934662011-12-12T09:33:34.045-05:002011-12-12T09:33:34.045-05:00My GOD, this is heavenly. I want to carry your wor...My GOD, this is heavenly. I want to carry your words in my pocket, every day. You inspire me to be a better writer. To want to be a better writer. You inspire me to live a better life. To want to live a better life. You inspire me to combat those worries and those plaguing, oppressive fears. To want to combat them.<br /><br />You absolute beauty.beckyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13607850411588165692noreply@blogger.com